Finding Redemption Chapter 10
Due to nature of the violence, I thought it was best to post Chapter 9 Behind Closed Doors. Jarrod and the Llewellyns came across another group of travellers who had been massacred and were then...
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Smiles all around in this chapter...Jarrod got the best birthday present. I love the description of Deadwood. Well done. I know I wouldn't buy a vacation home there in the 1870s.
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Deadwood certainly is not a place to raise a family! Jarrod sure seemed to like his birthday present. Jarrod get the girl and get on home !
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Good advice Stocktonlinda, going back home is their best option and I am sure Jarrod's family will love his girl. I am still wondering where Nick and Heath are? cas
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Ahh! So glad Jarrod found a bit of happiness on his Birthday!
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wondering if that kiss could mean what he hoped it did. Well Jarrod by the end of the chapter you had your answer. Now take the lady & her da back to Stockton and civilization.
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So Jarrod has begun to find happiness. Perhaps now is the time he should return home and face his past - running won't help him anymore... he needs to move forward. A hopeful chapter indeed!HUGS!...
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I know Jarrod liked that birthday present. I hope Sioned can get more out of Jarrod and affect a reunion with his family.
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I love your story. I believe she struck some gold alright. Barkley Gold! I am a little jealous. ;0)
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Happy Birthday! I wonder what your family is thinking today? (But I've very glad he has found some comfort at last.) Strong writing, helping me visualize the worrisome surroundings without losing...
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Jarrod has been lost for so long. Hopefully now, with Sioned's help, he's begun the long road home.
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The air was scented with fresh-cut pine, but that pleasant smell was almost overpowered by the miasma of too many animals and too many people. I liked your use of scent. Oh what a town, great...
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